I.
The cold heavy rain dots
eager to get close with the flower
But drenched its beautiful cloths
II.
A full moon in sky
sprinkles with chilly, luminous, and silent calmness
Burns a hole at night
Two Haikus
I.
The cold heavy rain dots
eager to get close with the flower
But drenched its beautiful cloths
II.
A full moon in sky
sprinkles with chilly, luminous, and silent calmness
Burns a hole at night
HENNESSY ROAD 
I love the contrast you showed in the second one. The night was burning, and also silent.
very easy word, but strong atmosphere and feelings; used juxtaposition well
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Both of your haiku possess a strong sense of pictures!!! Quiet and peaceful.
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I like both of your haiku! The second one gives a more strong feeling, but the first one is so subtle! Is it about improper love? I love your style.
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Both of the haiku give readers a lot of imaginary space. For the first haiku, readers are easy to feel the atmosphere in it.
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